Clear Observations

Students read a “telling” sentence and rewrite it as a “showing” sentence using clear observable actions, expressions, or movements. This exercise helps students practice transforming vague statements into vivid details grounded in what could actually be seen. By focusing on observable cues rather than assumed feelings, students improve descriptive clarity and narrative realism. The activity strengthens their ability to communicate emotion and action through descriptive observation rather than explanation.

Curriculum Matched Skills

English Language Arts – Show, Don’t Tell Writing

English Language Arts – Using Observable Detail

English Language Arts – Sentence Revision and Improvement

English Language Arts – Descriptive Writing Technique

This worksheet is part of our Writing from Observation Worksheets collection.