Smooth Scene Builder

Students are given a choppy descriptive passage and must combine the short sentences into smoother, more fluent writing. They revise for flow, clarity, rhythm, and transitions while keeping the meaning intact. The activity teaches learners how to merge related ideas, eliminate repetition, and improve readability. This helps students understand how sentence structure and pacing affect descriptive writing. It builds confidence in crafting cohesive and engaging narrative descriptions.

Curriculum Matched Skills

English Language Arts – Sentence Combining

English Language Arts – Improving Flow and Rhythm

English Language Arts – Transition Use

English Language Arts – Descriptive Writing Revision

This worksheet is part of our Editing and Revising Descriptive Passages Worksheets collection.