Smoother Transitions

In this worksheet, students revise a choppy descriptive paragraph by improving or adding transitions to create smoother pacing and stronger flow. The original passage about an art studio contains abrupt sentence shifts and missing connectors, prompting learners to rewrite it in a more cohesive style. Students focus on linking ideas logically, adjusting sentence structure, and increasing readability. This activity teaches how transitions shape rhythm, clarity, and the overall effectiveness of descriptive writing. Learners practice combining details naturally so the scene reads as one unified paragraph rather than disjointed statements.

Curriculum Matched Skills

English Language Arts – Transition Word Use

English Language Arts – Sentence and Paragraph Cohesion

English Language Arts – Revising for Flow and Pacing

English Language Arts – Descriptive Paragraph Enhancement

This worksheet is part of our Editing and Revising Descriptive Passages Worksheets collection.